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Had you ever heard about United Arab Emirates?? Had you ever heard about U.A.E.?? Today I will make you hear about it which is my country. U.A.E is a small country. It is a country made up of seven emirates' Abu Dhabi, Dubai, Sharjah, Ajman, Umm Al-Quwain, Ras Al-Khaimah, and Fujairah. It was founded on December 2, 1971. This is now celebrated as the annual National Day. There many things I want to talk about it.

First I want to talk about it's self. It is bordered by Oman to the east and Saudi Arabia to the west and south. Iran is the closest country to it from the north. It has more that 200 islands. The President of it is His Highness Shaikh Khalifa Bin Zayed Al Nahyan. The capital of the UAE is Abu Dhabi. This is where the seat of government is. The UAE is four hours ahead of GMT. The official language of the UAE is Arabic. Other languages spoken are English, Hindi, and Farsi. It is look like a lot of countries in one country. You also will find people here speaking Urdu, Russian, South African and other languages. The official religion of the United Arab Emirates is Islam. You will also see some Churches in some cities like Dubai and Abu Dhabi. The Population of the United Arab Emirates at the end of 2005 was 4.041 million. The weather is very hot all over the year. On the other hand, the UAE is a major player in the global oil industry. The emirate of Abu Dhabi alone accounts for 10 per cent of the world's confirmed oil reserves. In addition to, Burj Dubai, a tower rising in the booming Gulf emirate, has become the tallest building in the world at 512.1 meters

Second I want to talk about Itâs flag. The U.A.E. flag is colored by green, white, black, and red.
The green is the green land, the white is the white hart, the black is the black gold which is the oil and gas, At last, and the red which is our blood.

Third I want to talk about it's people clothes. Men wear a traditional garment called "dishdasha" or "kandura". It's usually made from cotton and it is white. However, it covers the man's body from his neck to his ankles. Most men wear a traditional headdress that is include three pieces. The "ghutra", the "agal", and the "qahfiyya" which is wear under the "ghutra". Women's clothes are made from silk. The "abbay", ablack cover, is worn on the outside. Over her head, a woman may wear a "shaileh". It is like a scarf and it covers her hair.

In conclusion, I think it is one of the most countries that people dream to visit. You can find every thing you want in it. It is have a lot of cultural. I decided to visit it next summer. I hope visit it with you in one plan. I think you will agree with me after you heard all that about it. If you want to know more about this great country, you can borrow this book from the library which name is United Arab Emirates Enchantment of the world and written by Byron Augustin.

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Ok, I tried to edit your speech for you but there are a few places that make no sense and I was unable to figure out what your saying but here is the edited version. I hope it helps you.

Have you ever heard about United Arab Emirates also known as U.A.E.?
Today I will like you hear about country, the United Arab Emirates. U.A.E is a small country, made up of seven emirates' Abu Dhabi, Dubai, Sharjah, Ajman, Umm Al-Quwain, Ras Al-Khaimah, and Fujairah. It was founded on December 2, 1971. This is now celebrated as the annual National Day. There many things I would like to tell you about it.

Firstly, I want to talk about the country itself. It is bordered by Oman to the east and Saudi Arabia to the west and south. Iran is the closest country to it on the north. It has more than 200 islands. The President is His Highness Shaikh Khalifa Bin Zayed Al Nahyan. The capital of the UAE is Abu Dhabi. This is where the seat of government is. The UAE is four hours ahead of GMT. The official language of the UAE is Arabic. Other languages spoken are English, Hindi, and Farsi. It appears like a lot of countries within one country. You also will find people here speaking Urdu, Russian, South African and other languages. The official religion of the United Arab Emirates is Islam. You will also see some Churches in some cities like Dubai and Abu Dhabi. The Population of the United Arab Emirates at the end of 2005 was 4.041 million. The weather is very hot all over the year. On the other hand, the UAE is a major player in the global oil industry. The emirate of Abu Dhabi alone accounts for 10 per cent of the world's confirmed oil reserves. In addition to, Burj Dubai, a tower rising in the booming Gulf emirate, has become the tallest building in the world at 512.1 meters

Secondly I want to speak about its flag. The U.A.E. flag is green, white, black, and red.
The green represents the green land, the white, white heart, the black is the black gold which represents the oil and gas, and the red represents our blood.

Thirdly, I want to speak about the clothing. Men wear a traditional garment called "dishdasha" or "kandura". It's usually made from cotton and it is white. However, it covers the man's body from his neck to his ankles. Most men wear a traditional headdress that includes three pieces. The "ghutra", the "agal", and the "qahfiyya" which is worn under the "ghutra". Women's clothes are made from silk. The "abbay", ablack cover, is worn on the outside. Over her head, a woman may wear a "shaileh". It is like a scarf and it covers her hair.

In conclusion, I think it is one of the countries that most people dream of visiting. You can find everything you want in it. It has a lot of culture and I have decided to visit it next summer. I hope to visit it with you in one plan. I think you will agree with me after you heard all that about it. If you want to know more about this great country, you can borrow this book from the library which name is United Arab Emirates Enchantment of the world and written by Byron Augustin.

Can somebody revise or correct my sentences?

jhjh

U.A.E the great country.

Had you ever heard abou United Arab Emirates?? Had you ever heard about U.A.E. ?? Today I will make you hear about It which is my country. U.A.E is a small country. It is a country made up of seven emirates' Abu Dhabi, Dubai, Sharjah, Ajman, Umm Al-Quwain, Ras Al-Khaimah, and Fujairah. It was founded on December 2, 1971. This is now celebrated as the annual National Day. There many thing
I want to talk about.

First I want to talk about it's self. It is bordered by Oman to the east and Saudi Arabia to the west and south. Iran is the closest country to it from the north. It has more that 200 islands. The President of it is His Highness Shaikh Khalifa Bin Zayed Al Nahyan. The capital of the UAE is Abu Dhabi. This is where the seat of government is. The UAE is four hours ahead of GMT. The official language of the UAE is Arabic. Other languages spoken are English, Hindi, and Farsi. It is look like a lot of countries in one country. You also will find people here speaking Urdu, Russian, South African and other languages. The official religion of the United Arab Emirates is Islam. You will also see some Churches in some cities like Dubai and Abu Dhabi. The Population of the United Arab Emirates at the end of 2005 was 4.041 million. The weather is very hot all over the year. On the other hand, the UAE is a major player in the global oil industry. The emirate of Abu Dhabi alone accounts for 10 per cent of the world's confirmed oil reserves.

Secound I want to talk about It,s flag. The U.A.E. falg is colored by green ,white,black,and red.
The green is the green land. The white is the white hart. The black is is the black gold which is the oil and gas. Finally, the red which is our blood.

Third I want to talk about it's people clothes. Men wear atraditional garment called "dishdasha"
or "kandura". It's usually made from cotton and it is white.However, it covers the man's body from his neck to his ankles. Most men wear a traditional headdress that is include three pieces. The "ghutra", the "agal", and the "qahfiyya" which is wear under the "ghutra". Women's colthes aer made from silk. The "abbay", ablack cover, is worn on the outside. Over her head, a women may wear a "shaileh". It is like a scarf and it covers her hair.

In conclusion, I think it is one of the most countries that people dream to visit. You can find every thing you want in it. It is have a lot of cultural. I decided to visit it next summer. I hope visit it with you in one plan. I think you will agree with me after you heard all that about it. If you want to know more about this great country, you can borrow this book from the library which name is United Arab Emirates Enchantment of the world and written by Byron Augustin.

Answer
Your sentences are very choppy and the approach is very basic (we will put spelling and grammar issues to one side)

Despite Western influences, men still wear traditional garments, starting with the dishdasha or kandura. This is a white cotton body suit, which covers from neck to ankles.

The headdress [name here] consist of three parts, the ghutra [which does what?], the agal [which signifies what?] and the qahfiyya, which is worn under the ghutra [for what reason?]

If you wish to reach out to people who couldn't find the UAE on a map, you musn't limit what you say. Consider that they know nothing, so this is a chance to really expalin in some detail

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